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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: See Through

    Hi! I'm here for a review! :mrgreen: I agree with what the reviewer above me said about this being a very good first try. It's much better than what my ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)

    I really liked this. I usually don't like parodies because they seem so pointless and it's too much like a mockery of someone else's work, but I don't even care ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hourglass

    I don't think this was bad. It was pretty short but you managed to throw some imagery in there that works. The second stanza, where you described the sand and ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Moon And All The Stars

    I have to agree with Hiadel here. I really liked his example with John Wayne. There are plenty of westerns and I don't think I've ever heard anyone complain about ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Come With Me

    Hello, this is my first time reviewing lyrics so what I say here may be totally ignored. :) The start are gazing down on you Telling you’re the only one ...

    Apr 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darling, Drink

    I really liked this. This is one of those that I read twice in a row, not because it was confusing, but because it was so good. I liked the ...

    Apr 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mistress:Prologue (rated 18+ explicit scenes)

    First of all, let me apologize for taking so long to read this. :/ Life and school just got really crazy and I was a little overwhelmed. I really liked ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Wishing for Death--Chapter 2

    Hi there! I'm here for your review! I thought this was very good and interesting. I could feel the emotion from the story. I think it's very cool that you ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Anna and Ryan- their story

    I really liked this but I felt like there were some points where there could have been more detail. I understand that this is just a short story but that's ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Timeless Masquerade

    Hi! Brainy's here to review your poem. :) Let me start by saying I love this. I actually read it twice back to back. Not because it was confusing, but ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wonderful Times and Rhymes

    Hi there! I think this is a very cute little rhyming poem. :) There only problem I may have is right here... all sitting around the family tree. all filled ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Steven Poem

    Hi Unknown! You should know that in order to get more people to review your work, you should do some reviewing yourself. It's just an easy way to get people ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re:

    I really like the idea behind this. It's something that everyone goes through at one point or another. :) The problem when you write about a topic like this is ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dawn Poetry 1

    Hi! I'm going to review your poem! :) Let me start by saying that this poem just about sums up something that I'm going through right now(except I'm a girl ...

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspire me.

    Since I don't write a lot of poetry, I usually don't critic it but I came across your poem and I just wanted to say good job. In my opinion, ...

    Jan 22, 2010


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