borntobeawriter

Hi there, I'm Tanya, your friendly reviewer! First off, I haven't read the previous chapters so I will be reviewing on this content only. That being said, wow. I loved ...

Hey there Rosey! I should totally be nano-ing... But then I saw the sad panda on the main page and couldn't resist. So, here I am. First off, I have ...

Hey there, I'm Born, here for a helpful review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I find myself very confused, but I will try my best to give you ...

Hello, Ember! Ok......... Ok! Well. Viper? Eh..... You remember when I mentioned Wishy-Washy? Well, he definitely was in this chapter. He is ALL over the place. He becomes 'hysterical' upon ...

Hello Ember! You need a comma after 'important'. "Ah, that I have no doubt. It has to be a special occasion for you to come within feet of me." She ...

Hey there, Ember!! Miles away, Alexia opened her eyes and exhaled. She was out of practice with telepathy, and it had taken considerable effort to summon the first two. But ...

Aw, man, this is BY FAR my favourite chapter! I completely ADORED the mother-daughter Relationship. The daughter in me wishes I had had that kind of Relationship with my mom. ...

Hello, Ember! Ok, well, apparently I'm the only one who *liked* the POV in Graham's voice. I mean, they've been 'together for 2 years' and she suddenly does something like ...

Hi ember! Ok, I jumped the previous chapter because I had nothing to add. But here I am for the next one! I've noticed you use the passive voice a ...

Hello, tis me again! Ok, someone brought up something I forgot to mention in the previous chapter. You DO use a lot of 'loose' description. I can't remember exactly but ...

Oooooooooook. Chapter 2. Really need to get to bed. But really want to read on. Yeah. So. Am I the only one who read 'amiss' properly or am I mistaken? ...

Wow. Ok. Well, first "review" in, what? 2? 3 years? Well, it's been a while. What I really loved about this chapter is how fast we get into the meaty, ...

Well hey there, I'm Tanya!! Ok. I see you've already gotten a great review, so I'm going to stick to the story itself. It is way too fast-paced. I know ...

Hey there! I'm Tanya, pleased to *meet* you. :) I'm going to make this as painless as possible for both of us, but I apologise in advance: I'm quite rusty. ...

Hi Jayleigh! Would you believe that I actually got the time for this? And do you have any idea how long it's been since I've reviewed something? Months. Years. a ...