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i like it, very deep and true.

i like it, i think it's something that everyone can relate to at some point in their life. very good.

hey, i forgot to say that you had very good use of alliteration in this line, "pitiful pretense of pleasure?" and i liked your ending, it felt very strong.

very nice. depressing and angsty. it kinda leaves you hanging, in a good way.

ahh, very romantic and very pretty. good job.

wow. very good. i liked it alot, deep, dark, but straight and to the point, very good.

i like it, deep, makes you think.

i really like this poem. it's deep but at the same time not complicated, very straight-forward, an easy and nice read. good job.

i liked it, but the ending kinda sucks, i don't know why you hate it though, the first three stanzas are really good. I liked the third stanza the best.

i liked it, you have really good similes in it, especially 'Racing like the shark's prey', very clever. i love the ending too.

Hi, I just joined this site and your poem is the first poem that i have read. I guess i got lucky because I really like this poem and I ...