bluecows

Thank you :] I was unaware that you HAD to use punctuation in poetry, I always thought it was a matter of choice (my bad). I'll correct that now!

I don't know, I thought the last line sounded fine how it was... but other than that I agree with the person above, I also think it's an awesome poem ...

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked you it, this poem means alot to me xoxo

Anorexia is commanly called Ana among anorexics, just as there is death and the person Death if you see what I mean, sorry for any confustion. And I missed out ...

What was it about then?

aww thanks :D anorexia actually but theres still a lot of similarities in their attitudes towards food

I like the bit 'They say I have my mothers skin; I can't see how they tell. It looks the same as everyone else's.' That made me smile Errm... apart ...

Yeah it was, this poem didn't feel or look right with lots of punctuation in it so I only put those two bits in :D

I stopped writing since i started going out with my boyfriend but maybe i will start again, you never know :wink: Oh yeah, thanks for the correction on the typo, ...

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i thought i had??

i am the pupil, you are the teacher, through you i learn how to truly be free. i must say that bit sounds like a cliche (even to me). i ...

Oh. You live in a field? Forget it, some you get, some you don't. bluecows :roll: