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  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: Gone

    Oh, wow. A story of loss from the perspective of a mother isn't something I see too often. It's also uncommon to have a short story with suicidal themes that ...

    May 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: Gone

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    Oh, wow. A story of loss from the perspective of a mother isn't something I see too often. It's also uncommon to have a short story with suicidal themes that ...

    May 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Stardust

    Ask and ye shall recieve! First off, I love this poem. Very existential, as pondering the vastness of the universe tends to be. This conjured thoughts of heat death, our ...

    Apr 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: After You'd Gone

    Hello. Losing someone can be extremely difficult. I hope writing this poem helped you reach some form of closure. I like how you emphasised the confusion that comes with grief. ...

    Apr 29, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: One Christmas Day

    Christmas in April! Woohoo! That aside, this is a really touching set of stories. They highlight that everyone can find joy, everyone has their own struggles, and that everyone deserves ...

    Apr 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: unintelligible memorandums

    I've thankfully never stuggled much with self-harm, but can relate immensely to the vulnerablility of opening up and seeking those with similar experiences online through art. It is rather unfortunate

    Apr 29, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: dream to be gone

    Hello! I'm a lover of both music and poetry, so I'll touch a little on both the music and the lyrics ^^ The song in general feels very mysterious. The ...

    Apr 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy

    Hello, hello! This is a really fun jump into this world of mythology. I felt really overwhelmed at the start. A lot of information was dropped all at once. Reading ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Theory of Relativity

    The first thing to cross my mind as I read this was Douglas Adam's Hitchhiker's Guide and his interesting style. However, continuing to read revealed little elements that were most ...

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: An Ode to A Sunflower

    Hello, and a belated welcome to YWS! This is a absolutely lovely poem, so here's a review :D The sunflower metaphor is a strong foundation. The way that you play ...

    Apr 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Colour of life

    Hello! This is a fun way for you to kick off NaPoWriMo, for sure. I love the way you incorperated colors! It's very engaging for the reader. The colors you ...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 1: Chill

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! The supernatural tag caught my eye as I was looking through the Green Room, and I'm so glad I stopped by to read this. This ...

    Mar 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: For now

    This has been in the green room two days too long in my opinion, and there's no way I couldn't leave a review on this after reading. Here's another stranger's ...

    Mar 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: uwu

    I fully agree with the thoughts about uwu expressed here. This piece conjures imagery of softness and pastel pinks for me, which is rather lovely. It's short, it's sweet, it's ...

    Mar 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Resist

    Hello, here's a quick review! The power of this poem is definitely in how vauge it is. It could apply to just about anything without issue. Some things that come ...

    Mar 17, 2021


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn