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Re: Gone
Oh, wow. A story of loss from the perspective of a mother isn't something I see too often. It's also uncommon to have a short story with suicidal themes that ...
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Re: Gone
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May 7, 2021
Oh, wow. A story of loss from the perspective of a mother isn't something I see too often. It's also uncommon to have a short story with suicidal themes that ... -
Re: Stardust
Ask and ye shall recieve! First off, I love this poem. Very existential, as pondering the vastness of the universe tends to be. This conjured thoughts of heat death, our ...
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: After You'd Gone
Hello. Losing someone can be extremely difficult. I hope writing this poem helped you reach some form of closure. I like how you emphasised the confusion that comes with grief. ...
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Re: One Christmas Day
Christmas in April! Woohoo! That aside, this is a really touching set of stories. They highlight that everyone can find joy, everyone has their own struggles, and that everyone deserves ...
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: unintelligible memorandums
I've thankfully never stuggled much with self-harm, but can relate immensely to the vulnerablility of opening up and seeking those with similar experiences online through art. It is rather unfortunate
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: dream to be gone
Hello! I'm a lover of both music and poetry, so I'll touch a little on both the music and the lyrics ^^ The song in general feels very mysterious. The ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy
Hello, hello! This is a really fun jump into this world of mythology. I felt really overwhelmed at the start. A lot of information was dropped all at once. Reading ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: The Theory of Relativity
The first thing to cross my mind as I read this was Douglas Adam's Hitchhiker's Guide and his interesting style. However, continuing to read revealed little elements that were most ...
Apr 8, 2021 -
Re: An Ode to A Sunflower
Hello, and a belated welcome to YWS! This is a absolutely lovely poem, so here's a review :D The sunflower metaphor is a strong foundation. The way that you play ...
Apr 7, 2021 -
Re: Colour of life
Hello! This is a fun way for you to kick off NaPoWriMo, for sure. I love the way you incorperated colors! It's very engaging for the reader. The colors you ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 1: Chill
Hello, and welcome to YWS! The supernatural tag caught my eye as I was looking through the Green Room, and I'm so glad I stopped by to read this. This ...
Mar 19, 2021 -
Re: For now
This has been in the green room two days too long in my opinion, and there's no way I couldn't leave a review on this after reading. Here's another stranger's ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: uwu
I fully agree with the thoughts about uwu expressed here. This piece conjures imagery of softness and pastel pinks for me, which is rather lovely. It's short, it's sweet, it's ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: Resist
Hello, here's a quick review! The power of this poem is definitely in how vauge it is. It could apply to just about anything without issue. Some things that come ...
Mar 17, 2021
