Young Writers Society

again you impress me! You work is super awesome!!!

you say your no good at endings? You LIAR!!! haha :) it was in the worst good, and emo poem are hard enough, but thank GOD you weren't all "i ...

It was super!! but in the being, don't explain in detail soooooooo much! It makes it SUPER boring after a while. and you said "i founded proof..." you mean found ...

this was wonderfuly short and easy to read, you have a gift to gt a point across in a few lines, whereas it takes me a few stana's to do ...

this was wonderfuly writtedn and well thought out, the ending was un-suspected, because you thought the woman was going to fight it and win, although i must say it was ...

your style is nice, ligt, and simple. It's a welcomed break from the over-worded, under-thought poems i keep comming across, just a few little, things, 1. kinda over used the ...

STANZA'S STANZA'S STANZA'S!!!!!!!! haha, that is one of the most important, yet hardest, part of poetry! but without them, the poetry get's clumped togther, and harder to read, a bit ...

This is short and sweet, yet complex at the same time....i love that about poetry, that and teh emptions that people put into it, i thik you were blessed to ...

I don't quite understand, you say her wool is black, then you say it's white? Are you trying to say something like on the outside they were the same, but ...

I honestly don't get what's going on here, did the person you love commit suicide? Because that's all i can come up with.... anyways.. these lines kind of didn't quite ...

It was a simple read, smooth on the eyes, i could easily relate, but again "blow" is putting the whole stanza, therefore the whole poem, at an awkward place. Your ...

hi!!!!!!! i spend a bit too much time in the poetry selection :) heh....anyways, on with the review!!! must say the only thing i can find off is the title, ...

i LOVED IT!!!!! no, seriously! it was THAT good!!!! of course it's a short story, but, i still think you should give more detail, it's like hanging a bone in ...

it was really good! i liked it a lot, although i hope the chapeters get a little more exciting. i don't much care for Vamp stories, so, hahaha :) “Seemed ...

This was amazing and captivating! this seems so, reat! i cannont find anything wrong with it, and got totaly sucked in to the poem!!!! you have a complex, yet simple ...