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Re: Simply As That
Thank you casey_kent! I love having dreams. They're wonderful! I love your sig! Jesus is great. Keep praising Him and you will be blessed :D. Anyway, best wishes!
Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:52 am -
Re: deleted
I'm agreeing with TL G-Wooster. Good job darkdove! See you 4th period!
Fri Apr 25, 2008 4:18 pm -
Re: 'I Am' Poetry
You're not so bad at poetry. This was quite good actually. I know that if you keep trying, you will be a great poet. Best wishes!
Fri Apr 25, 2008 4:08 pm -
Re: Ode to Rasullulah
We didn't say it needed to rhyme to be a poem. It needs a flow, stanzas, or some kind of structure, and if it doesn't rhyme, the poem should be ...
Fri Apr 25, 2008 4:03 pm -
Re: PHOENIX, or, Set Fire to the River
Nicly done and very creative! Great job.
Fri Apr 25, 2008 3:56 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Thank ya'll very much. I'm happy now.
Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:54 am -
Re: A River
I enjoyed reading this poem. It's really good. Keep uo the good work!
Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:44 pm -
Re: A Ranger in the Night
I'm in agreence with Vernon. He took the words right out my mouth. :P
Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm -
Re: Ode to Rasullulah
This doesn't seemed like poetry at all. It doesn't flow and it isn't structured like a proper poem should. You should try to rewrite this. Good luck and best wishes!
Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:06 pm -
Re: One Law
I kinda liked this. I enjoyed reading it! Good Job!
Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:02 pm -
Re: Simply As That
OMG I didn't catch that type-o!!! Thank you so much!
Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:49 pm -
Re: Deleted
I liked it. It seemed symbolic for something. Anyway good job!
Tue Apr 22, 2008 5:00 pm -
Re: Simply As That
Anybody else have an opinion about my poem? I'm up for anything!
Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:56 pm -
Re: City Streets
Sorry, but I totally agree with "God" (I hate that he used that name).
Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:07 pm -
Re: The Up
Ditto with eveything Adamarine said. Good work!
Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:03 pm