Published April 22, 2008
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I like it! It's good that you didn't just describe some random hermit crab and actually added some symbolism. That makes it a lot more interesting to contemplate what you might have meant by it! Aside from the grammatical errors that TL G-Wooster pointed out, good job!
I'm agreeing with TL G-Wooster. Good job darkdove! See you 4th period!
Very nice! Nice imagery and description.
Only, shouldn't it be "hermit crab"? Or is it an abnormally clever joke that I'm too thick to see? ^_~
There's too many spaces between the comma, and considering what comes next, is it best to end this line with a full stop? In fact you end every line with a full stop, when you don't need to, unless that's the point?
"Reading" would be better.
Their = they're