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I liked this poem. I wish there was more to it, but all in all, it was good. Keep writing! :D

Thank you Aedomir! I will make sure I will correct the errors. :D

I liked the Scottish language in the story. Yes, please space, but other than that, keep writing! :D

It was good. I'm mad that I didn't understand it fully, but I know it had a deep meaning to it because I know how you think. Keep up the ...

Thanks Big Bad Bear! :D

Nice story. The grammar was a little off, but otherwise, I say keep writing. :D

Beautifully written. I liked it. Keep up the good work! I would love to read more. :D

Welcome to the YWS! Pretty good for your first post. I agree with all what Izzyeyore said. Good luck!

Thank you all for reading my story and liking it. I'm here to please the people!

Thanks KJ.

Great Job. Simple, short, and to the point. Keep up the good work.

This comes to show that even the smallest poems can be good. I liked it. Keep up the good work! Write more please!! :D

Welcome to Young Writers Society! I really liked the story. Keep posting. I can't wait to read more :D

Another story like this will be coming out in around April or May. Get ready! If you have a suggestion on what you want me to do a spoof of, ...

Nice poem. I personally like "The Breakfast Club" better. You have a real nack for writing poetry.