blacktiger3915

Funny how Demeter said that that staze he quoted sounded like the opening to "So You Think You Can Dance". I was thinking the exact same thing. Anyway, I really ...

I liked this. This is how exactly how a child feels when an adult doesn't tell them the whole story on whats going on. I hate it when they do ...

To be honest, I didn't get the poem at all. The poem left me asking some questions like, is the dog a man or an animal? The reason I thought ...

I liked the poem. I even liked how you set up the poem. The words seem to trickle down the page and land into a big puddle. I also liked ...

God is 2D like the chalkboard, and hark the herald rabbits chew, "Well never have a God like you!" ---------------------------------------- Yes, it's demented. Don't ask my brain where it came ...

I know I'm a little late, but welcome to the young writers society! :smt039 Anyway, for some odd reason I heard of this before. But maybe I'm confused. This poem ...

First off, welcome to the young writers society Chiara and Lina16! I'm Brooke by the way. :backtotopic: I liked this! To me this should be under other poetry, but what ...

Curse my stupid computer!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! I tried several times to pull up the video, but it says that it can not find it. I hate this. I really wanted to see ...

Hello! This was such a nice poem. It was so cute! I also have an inner child, but I love to let her out sometimes. I really enjoyed reading this ...

First, I read it a couple of times and I still don't know why the song is called "Hello Kitty Love Life". Is it a metaphor for something? Second, I ...

I live in an all black neighborhood and go to an all black school and all I hear is rap rap rap. It came to a point when I started ...

Oh my goodness! Toooooooo many questions! My head is hurting. This really isn't poetry. Just a bunch of questions with no rhythm or flow. I wrote a poem that asked ...

There is a foul depth in souls A dark chasm of emptiness and shame An abyss of sorrow Unfound and nonexistant in none, As it grows Life seems positively penetrable ...

First off welcome to the young writers society! I'm Brooke or Blacktiger3915 by the way. Good to have you here! :backtotopic: I thought the poem was actually pretty good. I ...

Hello! This poem was very good. I really enjoyed it. The dawn of the new era strikes, raising its curtains to a new sun. I feel its energy sparking through ...