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Short but powerful. Well done for a well constructed poem :) But I've began again. --- Or let the evil in? again and in don't rhyme and in the UK ...

I can't say that I agree with the feelings expressed in this poem, but it was well written and it flows well. Pieces such as this seem to be your ...

I liked this a lot - it was very poignant, even though you kept it brief. All the words/phrases seemed well chosen and it worked well. There's nothing more to ...

This is okay - but I must admit that I'm not really sure what you actually mean at the end with your reference to dead parents. Am I missing something ...

This poem is good and it's also very potent. There's just one thing that confuses me a little. You switch tenses part way through a sentence;- I fall, he won. ...

I like this story a lot so far and there isn't really anything wrong with it, so I'm going to be really mean and pick up on every tiny little ...

This is alright but I find one thing a little strange - why doesn't she feel some sort of affinity for the amulet when she first has it, instead of ...

This was okay - but I agree with Vernon that you should cut the last parts. Also I must say that your poem doesn't really make your reader feel at ...

I liked this - it's definitely radio material. Now I know that as it's a rap it's not supposed to be grammatically correct or anything, but there's one thing that ...

1. I think that Skye seems to be a fairly rebellious teenager, but I'd hazard a guess that she's also a little bit of a geek at heart - and ...

I don't get the title... maybe that's just me though. Anyway it's a great piece, but I do agree that splitting it up would work better. Also, I've always been ...

This is quite good. I think that you may be a little confused about your virtues though. The four you talk about are the cardinal virtues. The heavanly virtues (of ...

Nice choice of style - it's not common to find poems written like that on YWS, so yours stands out. I like it, because even though it says all the ...

I like this. I think it reads quite well, though it would be better if you added some punctuation. Well anyway, I think it deserves a star so - *gives ...

Most of the line by line stuff has been taken care of, but there's just one thing:- Going father up then I shall ever reach. I miss it. I think ...