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You all reviewed this before I could finish editing it! :D Thanks for reading and commenting on it! (And welcome to the new dudes ;))

It's all basicly satire. Thanks for the review! :D

Oh right, gotcha! That makes sense. Your writing is only going to get better and better, mate. Keep at it! ;)

That's totally a typo! Thank you very much, I don't know how that slipped me by. Fixed :D

"You're officially my mane man!" Shut up. This is too funny! Keep it up Mandrake!

Hey Raven! I know 5-7-5 is among the norms, however, its not an absolute necessity. I liked what I had. Thanks for reading!

Thanks for the review Iggy! The movie was the 1995 heist film "Heat". Noone of you got that ;) Not going to continue this in any way, just another writing ...

Thanks for the review Smartypants! You guessed the wrong movie though. ;)

That was strange.

"I'm a loser baby, so why don't you kill me?" Love the song, and it worked well here. I like it ;) Also: Edit Right now, the Devil is beating ...

Write better reviews, mate.

Thanks for the review Mandrake. Haha, I do try to include a character named Jeff in all of my stories. I always liked that name, sounds kinda goofy. (No disrespect ...

Hey Magenta! Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. ;) because you aren't referring to "the wizard" as a part of a Steve's name, In every instance where ...

Nice review, magpie. GreenTulip, learn to accept criticism.

Put more effort into into it, Mandrake. This was....nothing.