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Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part II)
Hey Silverlock! Making my way through this series and I have now reached your second chapter. In your previous chapter I did a bit of harping here and there, here ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part I)
Hey again Silverlock! Back for your first chapter. And this time it's a lot longer and I have much more I could comment on. Well, it appears that your story ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)
Hey Silverlock! Well, I really like your effective, straight to the point reviews and I've actually had this piece open in a hidden tab for almost a week now. It's ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 2
Hey again Noelle! Back for the second part of your second chapter! And this time I'm aware you posted awesome new stuff, so I'm not severely behind. (In fact I'm ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 1
Hey Noelle! Well, I saw you posted a new chapter recently....but, not this one. I guess I've fallen behind. Or you have totally kept me out of the loop. I'm ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Prologue
Hey Lone Writer! First things first; welcome to YWS! I really hope you'll enjoy yourself here. This seems to be a pretty interesting story. Mainly because of it's weird setting ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Magnolia
Hey fortis! So I've finally gotten around to reviewing something by you. I don't think I've done that before. I really like your poetry, how creative it often is and ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: "Sir, are you Batman?" Chapter 2- Plan A?
Hey Ginga! Man, you already have a full second chapter of this written already. That's really cool! As with the previous chapter, this was pretty good. Again, I found very ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Ron Raevsky Has Extraordinary Painting Skills
Hey Ron! I guess I should start off with welcoming you to YWS! Or rather, welcome back (as this seems vaguely familiar to me). What I love about this article ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: The Evolution
Hey Music! I guess I should start off with a big giant welcome to YWS! I hope you'll enjoy yourself here. Alright, this was a pretty interesting story, despite parts ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: "Sir, are you Batman?" Chapter 1- Downtown Gotham Sucks ( A lot)
Hey Ginga! First off, welcome to YWS! This is an awesome place and I hope you'll love it here. Well, for a Batman fanfiction where the main character is neither ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Hey Mack! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here ;) Alright, I'll quickly go through this prologue for your story. It's pretty short though, so there's not too ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Nowhere
Hey Legible! This was a pretty interesting read, and it was very well written. There were a few things I could comment on though, so I'm here to hand out ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: Vampiral Final Chapter
Hello Cesare! We have arrived at your final chapter! Whoa, what a long strange journey it has been. :D I'll go through this final part before ending with some concluding ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial 11
Hey Cesare! Just two chapters left now, so I'm here for your eleventh one. It's a very short chapter, so there's not too much I can comment on. But I'll ...
Apr 14, 2014
