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Hey Snowy! Unfrozen, Snowfall name and snowman avatar; you got a thing for winter don't you? If Jack Frost ends up being a villain in this, remember, I called it. ...

Hey Emmylou This poem was pretty good, and you wrote from a POV in an excellent way. However, this is one of those things I think it's better left untouched. ...

Hey Allie! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy youself here. Alright, on to the review: I like your title and the basis for your story, however, it has a ...

Hey ferk! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, I love science fiction, so I was naturally interested in your prologue. However, in your prologue ...

Hey bud. Welcome to YWS! You need to break this up into chapters, mate. Scrolling through this, it never ended. When you do, you'll get a bunch of helpful reviews. ...

Hey Dreamy! Here to do a dreamy review...well, I'm officially out of puns. Alright, on to the review. First off, you seem to have an issue going on with the ...

Hey Alex! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, psychopath and proud of it. I like your title. This is a violent story you got here. Reading through ...

Hey Des0late! Before we review stuff; Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your time here and I don't totally wreak havoc all over this work as your first reviewer. Don't ...

Hey LyingLipsShinyTeeth! You know, I usually try to make up a nickname for whoever I review, but not today. I love your name. Alright, on to the review. First off, ...

Hey tteele! I'm not too much of a poetry person, but I do enjoy the classics, moreover; it's review day and I'm looking into peoms. Which I rarely review, so ...

Hey Threnody! It caught my eye that you have written so much, so I wanted to do a review of something. I found little to add in your works except ...

Hey young&crazy! First off, welcome to YWS! It's a good place to learn and get guidance. Now, I'm going to say I enjoyed your piece, as I guess it stirred ...

Hey Dan! Alright, time to rub my eyes with disbelief after managing to read through this piece. Which was very tough mate. I can't in all honesty belive this was ...

Hey Amir! It's review day! And I chose to review this short of yours because the subject matter is quite interesting. Something a lot of people struggle with, and this ...

Hey Nightlyowl! Happy review day! Time to do some reviews and wreak havoc on unsuspecting writing! Alright, pretty grisly story you have here. I'm a fan of killer stories, especially ...