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Dear Secrete, Hey, this just so happens to be the best and most wonderful, actually I mean outstanding piece of literature that I have ever read. I love how it ...

I very much enjoyed the idea of the poem. I think it was wonderful how it relates life to baseball. On the other hand though the way you wrote this ...

This was an outstanding poem. I loved how it was short yet ,well, sweet. I also loved the words you used such as "memory". I also enjoyed how you made ...

I really enjoyed this piece of literature. While I was reading through this I could picture everything that was happening in my head. It almost felt right I was right ...

This was very well written. I only found a couple grammer and spelling problems. The first one is (lay on the fresh green lawn), this should actualy be written as ...

I have to be honest this could of been alot better. If you simply made it so that your readers could picture whats happening in their head. When I read ...

Over all this poem was a real piece of art. I enjoyed the topic you picked even though it made me weep inside. I also enjoyed how you made each ...