beccalicious94

Yay fellow 26 year-old on here! =] I love this poem about August. I think you do a great job of repeating the "apple pie" and "tipsy" almost showing a ...

I love this! I love the utilization of the three consecutive days of the week as the start of each stanza. While reading this poem, I really was wondering who ...

This definitely has the voice of a child/parent relationship. I'd love to see a scene before and after this. It doesn't seem like Kaila got any resolution. The title is ...

Hi dear! I'm really glad you posted this as a way to ease in to your work (considering I missed about a years worth of chapters). To answer your questions: ...

Hi there, ameliabedelia241! Becca here for a quick review. So, I really liked this piece. It flowed very naturally, it was perfectly paced. I didn't feel like any information was ...

Hi dear! Becca here for a quick review. So, I've read this poem several times since it's been in le Green Room for so long. I haven't had much to ...

Hi myjaspercat, Becca here for a quick review. I've read your poem twice now, and I was actually thinking it might read better as a personal essay/memoir. What do you ...

Hi Lupa22, Becca here for a quick review. I've read at least one of your other poems, and I'm impressed by your maturity and how eloquently you write about everyday ...

Hi Aleta! Becca here for a quick review. I thought this was a really wonderful poem, and definitely a step above 'decent' as you described it. I thought this poem ...

Hey NightScape! Becca here for a quick review. I definitely hear your sentiment at the end about not editing poems. I get the initial resistance towards making edits after you ...

Hey Iridescence! Becca here for a quick review. I thought it was interesting that you wrote about the smell of sunscreen blowing through the fresh summer air, since sunscreen is ...

Hi Thedancingmonk! Becca here for a quick review. This was a great poem, but I think there is some room for improvement. You use such beautiful imagery here, and even ...

Hi Audy! Becca here for a review. I've read this poem several times this week, but didn't think I had anything worth saying to the great Audy. Until now. This ...

Hey Lightsong! Becca here again for another review. I really love the idea of writing prayers to the divine. They can be really powerful. And also somewhat subversive, if your ...

Hi LightSong! Becca here for a quick review. I thought this was a unique poem, and I found it interesting that you chose to write about a political topic. I ...