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Re: my lover paints me
I really like the direction this poem is headed. It has a peaceful vibe. I like the romantic tone. It's not a poem of giant passion or desire, but a ...
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Re: Luminous nightmare (Prologue)
I really like the drama and sense of mystery here. You got me hooked. First of all, there's the characters. The protagonist is a kid we're supposed to relate to, ...
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Re: mothman
This story has great potential. I really like the stakes in it. The story focuses on a couple who have just moved out of their hometown and into the wild. ...
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Re: The Other Side
This is a really nice poem. I like the imagery in this. First of all, "the grass is greener on the other side." What other side are we on? Could ...
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Re: Six Minutes To Dawn
This story is rather intriguing. It tells us about who our protagonist is and what foes on as she enters a terrible state of mind. Ws see Constellation, our protagonist, ...
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Re: What Makes You Human
What makes us human? This is a question that people have answered for a long time. To me, being human means you can control yourself, as long as it's acceptable. ...
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Re: A flower's musings
I like the soft, warm vibes this poem gives the reader. It's short, but pretty sweet too. The poem personifies flowers as if they are their own characters in a ...
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Re: Screaming Through Her Eyes
I really like the dark vibe this story gives the reader. It almost feels like they are lost and have no place to go. The story involves a young woman ...
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Re: To The Toxic Person Who Hurt Me
This poem/short story/whatever really speaks to those who've had a er4ible life. Whether it be bullying, stealing, or manipulation, we've all been there. The story documents the author's real life ...
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Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends
This story is so sad. :'-( It's beautiful though. I really like how the narrator is trying to care for her best friend. She's trying to do well, but she's ...
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Re: Puppy Love
I really love the flow of this poem. It makes the whole thing feel a lot more natural. The whole idea of "puppy love" is that falling in love with ...
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Re: swear it on the sharp edge
I believe this poem does a good job of portraying how much the weather sucks right now. The winter is a terrible place to be in; it's always cold, brisket, ...
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Re: Internal Storms
Imo this poem perfectly represents the struggles faced by people in the entertainment industry. It could also be a metaphor for being left alone, not being true to yourself, not ...
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Re: Paper Straw
I really like the dark mood this poem is giving me. You should write poetry for real. The poem revolves around the idea that "no one noticed." Noticed who? We ...
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Re: Basking in My Own Blood
I really like the repetition in this. It doesn't have to rhyme, but it does have to revolve around a singular theme that connects it all. The first line "It ...
Dec 18, 2025
