bandgeek101

This was a very good piece, you really demonstrated who white haunts the main character, and I liked that. You gave good examples of white being everywhere, and I loved ...

This was a really good prologue, I mean, I loved it. The only thing I must say is that maybe you could try to slow the info-dump. I mean, we ...

I really liked the message of this poem, and I liked how you used figurative language to describe depression. The one thing I will comment on is how it is ...

Hi ScandalousPhoenix! Okay to ze review... This poem was pretty abstract, and I'm pretty sure that was the whole point when writing it. It was very creative, though I think ...

This poem was extremely thoughtful and I really enjoyed it. I mean, seriously, it was REALLY good. The only critique(if you could call it that)is that you could try to ...

I was enthralled with your story, though there were a few things that made it a bit hard to read. For example, it seemed like we needed a bit more ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it really gave you the feeling that I came from the heart. It seems like you really out thought in this poem, and that's important ...

Alright... First things first, this was absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!! I was totally drawn into Claude and Matthew's personalities and the story was written extremely well, with enough cliff hangers to kee

That was a really beautiful song for a friend, I enjoyed reading it. You definitely have a gift in songwriting. One thing I will critique on is some repetition that ...

I am impressed. It was really a perfect start for a novel, with cliff hangers and things unexplained. You always want to have mysteries in your book to keep the ...

It is a very good idea for a song though I think a few words might be repeated a bit too much. I know it might be for emphasis, but ...