ballerina13

This was really good. The concept that you have for a book written in poem form is very interesting. I really enjoyed that poem. I felt the emotion and heartbreak ...

I love these books too! The characters are well established and are hilarious. The fun games that Felicity, Pippa, Ann and Gemma have in the realms are thrilling. It is ...

Amazing books:(not in any particular order) 1.Peter Pan by James M.Barrie 2.Little Women by Louisa May Alcott 3.Phantom of the Opera by Gaston Leroux 4.Two girls of Gettysburg by Lisa ...

This side of love is very intriguing, it shows a different point of view. It was shocking how powerful it was and the amount of emotion was enveloped in it. ...

:D Hi! This was very short but I enjoyed the concept of it. I have a few suggestions however: Plot: the plot was good but, being that it was so ...

This was wonderful.The flow of it all was impeccable. I could hardly contain my elation. Great job. You got the feeling that dancers get when they are creating a piece. ...

The title drew me in but, it was very short. I found that it was well written but, tell us more about your character. Give us some more emotion. Draw ...

This was very interesting. I did not find any mistakes so good job there but, it lacked emotion and depth. You need to let us feel as if we l=know ...

This poem was heart wrenching. I loved it. There was so much emotion in it and showed real depth. The meaning is powerful and stays with you for awhile. It ...

It is getting better. But still, there needs to be a lot more description into the characters. Tell the readers what color hair all of the girls had, Anastasia's was ...

This was good. But your facts are a little off. Alexei and Anastasia were very close to each other. More close than Marie and Alexei. There are a few books ...

This was interesting but, a little strange. The characters are lacking, you need to have more depth and emotion to them. They seem dull to me. You must let us ...

This was good but, you have a lot to work on. For starters, you had a good hook but then, from there your characters are lacking. You need to describe ...

This poem was very good. It was heart wrenching. The last stanza was my favorite. This shows real promise. It felt as almost you were describing a moment that had ...

This piece was interesting. It showed real emotion and the reader could get a sense of the feelings in the poem. The spaces between the sentences was different. There were ...