ballerina13

This is so romantic but yet it shows so much regret and sadness. It reminds a little of "Romeo and Juliet" or even the poem "The Highwayman." Even though it ...

I loved this! There was great imagery. I could see it all. You had a great use of metaphors and similes. It was very true to who love is at ...

This was excellent. It showed real emotion and depth. It was heart wrenching in a beautiful way. You really opened up. I did not find many mistakes so, good job ...

This was interesting. The wording was good and it shows promise. Plus, it had great imagery. I could see it all. Good Job! Also, it sounded... old fashioned. Which is ...

This was extraordinary! It showed depth and emotion. I felt as if I was reading a poem by the great William Shakespeare. I did not find major errors but, the ...

Your prologue sounds interesting, but it is so short. Still, it grabs hold of the reader. I loved the ending. My few suggestions are to describe things more, the room ...

This was very good. I loved the last few lines. They showed such imagery. The entire poem was full of depth and emotion. The flow of it all could use ...

This was heart wrenching. Truly. But it was well written. It flowed pretty well. I have one word of advice. Emotion. The truth is that, while this was sad poem, ...

This was marvelous. It really gives a new perspective to the turmoil that we all face. The flow was remarkable as well. The stanza were different but, I suppose it ...

This style was interesting but, it gives more of a story feel. The plot was intriguing. But, you could use more descriptive words. Also, show more emotion. This was very ...

This piece was interesting but, the structure of it all bothered me. Try putting them into different stanza instead of just one word. There was good imagery. I could see ...

This story was interesting but, I feel that you need to establish your main character a bit more. Show us what she looks like, if she is shy or outgoing. ...

I loved this part. I like how you added more detail of the surroundings and people. Also, you established your main character well. I think you should describe the other ...

This was heart wrenching. I loved. I was actually tearing up. It shows depth and emotion about the feelings of true love. Showing the hope and tranquility it can give ...

This was marvelous! The title of this piece drew me in. The description of it all was breathtaking. I do feel thought that you should described your main character more. ...