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Hey Greenlight24, First of all, I'm happy to be the first to review this for you. And secondly, you said this will haunt me/ the reader in general for three ...

Hey Liaya, Happy to be the first to review your poem. I'm not an expert on poetry so you have to bear with me. Here goes My heart bursting,

Hey Maria, Well , first let me start of by saying, Very bold choice. Here is the part i liked; "As stated by the Wikipedia, technology is the making, modification, ...

Hey Harvey, Happy to review your story first. OK the part where you wrote "Do you love school ? Or hate it cause you're cool ?" I'm sorry but when ...

Hey, You see this below, that is very good to include in an essay. References: AGCO (AgCommand and AgCommand Advanced) (September, 2013). 20 technologies changing agriculture. Retrieved from Bob Niels

Hey Cyahazard, What caught my eye about this story, was the tittle.It's interesting and makes the reader curious to find out whats it about.I like how you started off with ...

Hey kobita First of all that is really long. And i loved it but hopefully other people will love it too and spare time to read it because it is ...

Hey there Dominusatramentrum, Firstly that is a Extremly long name lol. Anyway "the story" well i personally rekon not only is the review longer then the story itself but it ...

Hey there DragonNextec, Well for a first time song writer and cause i have no real experience on song writing i just say what i liked and hated about it ...

Hey 221B, I like your mash-up of a poem and a Child's tale.I enjoyed reading it and when i was i was thinking of the song "Mr Sandman bring me ...

Hey DragonNextec Wow, where to start first. Well firstly i like the way you spell shayne and stacye instead of shane and stacie. Very creative but then agin everybody spells ...

Hey Ameliaday You say that your not very good at being deep though that's just the character saying that.But you are very deep especially a15 year old and i like ...

Loved it! When i read it i sang it in my head and, well belieive it or not i could picture a famous singer singing that. Very emotional and grown ...

Good job i like the whole emotional vampire vibe can't wait for the next part of the story. I quite enjoy vampires and it fasinates me to see what people ...

wow.For somebody your age to write something like this,has got quite some skill.Though at the begining i could picture,the dead grl hanging practically right in front of me(very good detail),I ...