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Hi there, Great story, I just have a few things to comment on. No one told me of the tears that would form in my eyes when felt my father ...

If you listen to her new album, most of them aren't even about her life experiences. Blank space is all about what she thought people thought of her. She is ...

Hey, I really like this. Quick and simple. There isn't much detail or waffley long words and that makes this really easy to read. I am unsure off why you ...

I like this. I knew exactly what was coming, but yet my eyes widened as he shot Luke. It was a surprise. All the time I suppose I had been ...

My eyebrows knitted Uh.... knitted eyebrows? It sounds like it should be a good description, but I have no idea what the sentence is describing. Take it out? “I didn't ...

Wow! When I read this, I thought you would be sixteen or something! Amazing. Now, in the first part, I found a few errors that I did not see in ...

I did like this. It was very good, and the character development was clear. My only problem with this story was that, i felt it was too short. I felt ...

Hi! I shall review. And by the way, I am sick of vampire stories, so I'll be harsh... but as long as you don't go all Stephanie Meyers on me, ...

This is great. I don't think I can add to the coments above, so I'll just say that I couldn't keep my eyes open a few minutes ago, and now ...

"Don’t blame yourself for your family’s death Ava! None of the incidents that occurred is are/were your fault.” Carla’s bronze hair fell into her eyes as she stared at me ...

Hi! I shall review. Because I haven't read any of this yet, I will start at the prologue. Beads of sweat were dripping down his arms, and then slowly falling ...

As I walked down the abandoned, overgrown street, I could hear the roars and screeching of the once 'so-called' (1) animals, but now blood thirsty and flesh eating monsters that ...

first of all, I don't like the names, because it's just rosa and thorn with added letters. I was actually reading it as ROSE HEART for some reason for the ...

Go nerds! This was amazing. Couldn't imagine reading it as a book, like the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy. My brain might explode, but as a warning poster this was ...

Uhhh... that's... Wow. Very differnet perspective than I'm used to. I have to say that it was kind of... interesting. I got lost a few times, and the first half ...