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Re: Dandruff
Hello there! To start off, this piece made me smile, but when I neared the end, I actually feel really bad now, I am so sorry. I have had the ...
Sun Apr 03, 2016 12:19 am -
Re: Records in the Concrete
Hello, I'm Ash, and I will be reviewing starting now! Okay, I like the content of the writing. However, the grammar is a bit off. I mean more specifically, the ...
Sun Apr 03, 2016 12:12 am -
Re: Psychiatric
Hi there, my name is Ash and I am here to review. This was actually brought tears to my eyes. It reminded me of someone I once knew as well. ...
Sat Apr 02, 2016 6:09 pm -
Re: reaching to kiss the sun
Hi there. I just read this and my goodness I love it. I like how you formatted the poem.This is something I want to print out and put into my ...
Sat Mar 19, 2016 5:32 pm -
Re: Checklist to Creation
Hi there! I like this a lot.Because you used actual people in it (Pavlov, Darwin, Monet). And I like how you made the reader make them feel like they are ...
Sat Mar 19, 2016 5:28 am -
Re: 5 Essential Souls (That first chapter)
Hi I'm Ash and I am here to review. This did make me laugh I did enjoy reading it. However please add to it. What is in this room. WHat ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 3:04 am -
Re: Dead Flowers
Hi yeah this poem seems great to read. I'm Ash by the way. Okay let's get started. This is an old poem I know that and I felt like going ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 2:44 am -
Re: His Sweet Embrace
Hey I'm Ash I am here for a review. Aw yeah!Okay let's get started. This reminds me of my first love ah and my third that dumped me on the ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 12:59 am -
Re: The Life Of Kronus, Part 1. The Adventure Begins.
Hi there my name is Ash I am here to review! I hope you have a good day! Okay, let's get started? Okay I started reading. Already there is a ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 12:49 am -
Re: A Pathetic Piece of Writing
The satire in this. WOOOOOOOOOW. Nice job there kiddo. I actually love this. I love how you basically just did this.Like I didn't expect this. This is incredible. 10/10 Please ...
Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:13 am -
Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku
What did I just read this is actually great. I read the comments and reviews below and I laughed at those too. I'm gonna try to "review" this oh my ...
Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:20 am -
Re: Young Writers Society is more than a website
Hey I'm Ash. Welcome to the site I am glad you love it here. I love it here too. And you got everything spot on. And I'm glad you did. ...
Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:11 am -
Re: Regret But No Repentence
Hi there I'm Ash and I am here for a review! I hope all is well and I am happy to review! Okay let's get started! Overall I liked this ...
Wed Jul 01, 2015 3:15 pm -
Re: Family History Repeats Itself
Hi Morrigan! This is Ash here and I am ready to review. Aw yeah! I hope all is well. Okay let's get started! Like many other's before me said, this ...
Wed Jul 01, 2015 2:51 pm -
Re: The Eleventh Audition
Hi I am Ash! I hope all is well and I am here for a review! Aw yeah!Okay let's get started: I'm going to start with positives first. Cause you ...
Tue Jun 30, 2015 3:41 am