ashpandas

Hello there I'm ashpandas, and I really really liked this. You did a great job. My only comment is I think in some places there are flow issues through out ...

Hello!! I like this I like the concept and wording and I only have a couple notes "No matter which I turn, you're there." Maybe "Where" instead of "Which" or ...

Hello there, I'm ashpandas. I like the concept of this piece, but that being said I personally think it needs a lot of work. It has a lot of run ...

Hello there... I'm going to get into my comments right away cause I have more than a few and then tell you how I feel. "It hasn’t stopped drizzling and ...

Holy crap... This was dark and sad and good and man... I feel this on a huge personal level. I feel like beginning to end it really ties together. I ...

OK so I like the concept but I think it has a lot of errors. A few flow and grammar issues, also I think in some parts you add too ...

Hello there, I think you did a good job. I like the over all theme and meaning behind it. I think a lot of people could relate to it. And ...

Wow this was deep and very very good. I could also feel it on a personal level. I liked the flow I think and how the message is always clear ...

Now I don't know much about poetry, but I did find this interesting. I like it. I like how it's formatted, I think it flows really well too. it doesn't ...

Good work, I like what you did hear. I can very clearly see what you are trying to show and I like that. I do on the other hand have ...

Wow this was something, something good so don't worry. I liked what the story was about, and for the most part it's good. I just have a couple comments. "I ...

Hello, Id like to start with I really liked this, because it's something I personally can relate to. I like how vivid it was, and how anyone that has lost ...

Ok so first things first I think this is really cute, and good for a fifth graders work. It kind of reminds me of a poem I wrote in fourth ...