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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Love Lost

    Like tnme22 said, you must follow that rule. It's super important. But, unlike tnme22, I can't resist critiquing your story since I already started :wink: I used to stare at ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 2 (Edited)

    Wow, Cooldude, this is where I praise you. I have found absolutely nothing wrong with this. I just was left astounded. I could never write something nearly as wonderful as ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 1

    Hey, Cooldude. I must warn you that this is my first time editing scripts so just know that you have been forewarned :wink: Oberon: Giving information as if by speech ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 4

    Hey, Meep. I’m back because I really am enjoying this story. Well, hopefully this review helps. I had only been on the job for a week, but was forced to ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 3

    Meep, I read the beginning little blurp and I highty doubt this is poorly written from my past experiences with your writing. So I refuse to believe you and I ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Tomorrow Does Not Exist - Block I; Part V

    Okay, I guess I can’t say “sorry I’m late” anymore :wink: But I think I’m actually on time this time :D Scary. That morning I clearly remember wanting that emotional ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Influence Chapter 1

    'Ello, Ducati! You are the first person to post on my "Will Review for Food" Thread and I must thank you for asking for my help. I feel special :wink: ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 2

    'Ello, Meep! This story is getting so addicting. I couldn't help myself but to rush over here to read the next part :D “Fine, whatever. Just quit teasing me while ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 1

    Hey, Meep. I'm back for more :wink: Target sighted. In his usual irritating swagger, Nathaniel approached me, but I boldly took the initiative and started the conversation for once. I ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Tomorrow Does Not Exist - Block I; Part IV

    Hey, Joseph. Sorry it took me so long to get to this… again. :? Hopefully I’m still of some help to you. He all ready knew what was coming. “Don’t,” ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: WID Excerpt b

    Hi, Sorsha. Hopefully this review I can find something to be helpful with :wink: She lifted a hand was about to settle it on her arm, then decided against it ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: WID Excerpt a

    Hey, Sorsha. I’m still very disappointed about the whole not posting full chapters but I am still happy that you are still posting at all :wink: I love this story ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Stepping Into Static - Chapter 2 [Edited]

    Hey, Nic! I was so excited when you PM-ed me about this :D This story is already starting to grow on me! They flanked me either side like two guard ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Prologue

    Hey, Meep! I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while so this is my holiday gift to you :D hehe Turning in the direction of the voice, I spotted ...

    Dec 24, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Other Man (part one)

    Hello, RascalLover. I don't think I have ever read any of your work before, but I love the title of this and I'm greatly anticipating starting to critique this :D ...

    Dec 22, 2008


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber