artybirdy

It’s a dark and depressing poem, obviously about death, and it follows the story of a person who feels they are not needed or wanted. Their beliefs are so strong ...

I found your poem heartbreaking because the speaker's hopeful about meeting his love and, instead, he's given a shocking news. This piece tells me the story of a couple who ...

I haven't read anything like this before and, hence, I'd like to applaud you for your originality. I always like to explore the "bad" characters to gain a real, in-depth ...

Ooh, is it one of those stalker-horror stories? In any case, I’d love to read ahead. Let me know when you start posting chapters. Back to the prologue, it gripped ...

I’m here to review! Reading through the chapter, I noticed that a lot of your paragraphs are short, consisting of 2-3 sentences. That makes it awkward to read as there ...

Marvellous story! It shows that goodness still exists in this world and that, among many selfish people, there are those who’ll do anything they can to provide a better future ...

Oh, God, I’m extremely sorry for the late review. I promise to make it up to you. When I wanted to go outside, Dye was quick to turn the thought ...

I love the title! It reflects that, despite the years they have spent together, the speaker feels as if they met a day ago, presenting the idea that true love ...

I’m not sure if it’s intentional, but I could see/feel the rhyming scheme. Therefore, this piece should be a poem, rather than a short story. I could sense the struggle ...

I stumbled upon your story and decided to review it. Firstly, I’d suggest you to break down the massive paragraph to avoid confusing your readers. I found it difficult to ...

I'm here! Sorry for the late (short) review. Shouldn't Elsa be a little bit suspicious of Elliot? Since they are close, Emma would have mentioned another friend to her. In ...

I’m here! Sorry for the late (short) review. You left the mausoleum unexplored, reinforcing the mystery and suspense. I had a feeling Talia was close to discovering the truth. Just ...

It’s a sad poem, quite upsetting actually. But, it’s an eye-opener to the reality of today. The old lady’s words are wise and capture a sense of regret; it makes ...

Whew! You surprised me. It was an intense scene and you had paced yourself correctly, so it doesn’t lag nor does it feels too quick. I get why she left ...

It doesn’t feel like English is not your first language! I can see your efforts in crafting this piece, and you have done a good job. The first paragraph gripped ...