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The thing that I love most in the poem is probably the examples you use to describe how the speaker's feels when the person of interest does, well, anything . ...

First and foremost, wow. The subject itself is very unique, something you don't find a lot in most manuscripts, no matter how well it's written. Second, the style you wrote ...

Great imagery! Your words were very poetic and eloquent. There were some spots where I felt they didn't connect or flow as well as it could have, though. Plus, some ...

You're very good at rhyming without it being forced and keeping a uniform structure. But it's poems as artfully constructed as these that make you want to know more. By ...

Excellent poem! You conveyed the emotion very well! Now let's get nit-picky... First, without quoting anything, I've noticed that in most of the poem, the beginning of each verse was ...

Very impressive piece, especially since there are so little words and verses in each stanza. Love the rhyme scheme. Made one grammar mistake... I feel no cold, I fell feel ...

The amount of fascination I have can only be compared to the amount of confusion I have as well... All I can really get from this was there was someone ...

Very amazing. I thought of Deepavali while I was reading this, since it was yesterday where I live. When I saw the footnote at the bottom, I was thrilled to ...

This actually reminded me of something I once wrote way back when... I liked how all the stanzas and verses were very direct. The way you write it does NOT ...

First thing I need to point out: the vocabulary. Loved it! Not to many lengthy words that you need to use a dictionary for, but it is not limited to ...

Brilliant essay. I really have nothing to say about the deduction of words; I have the same problem with writing essays. One thing I would like to point out was ...

Regardless of it being as short as it is, it is very good! It is very abstract, but well written. This reminds me of a girl who realizes she has ...

Excellent poem! The emotions you get from the poem are, I felt, implied subtly rather than saying, "I am worried that your kindness will go away in the future. I ...

Very true. I think most people do know this is an issue, but I do not know what is actually being done by this. Not that I am disagreeing with ...

All I have to say is amazing! The first sentence makes the reader stop and think, "What sounds like the ocean?" Very good hook at the beginning. Perhaps the smooth ...