artemis15sc

So... I'm pretty sure I reviewed the chapter before this one once before. I'm excited I get to read this next one. I'll just say that I think this was ...

Hey there! I have to say this is probably the most interesting BTS fanfiction I've ever read. You definitely get points for creativity. Granted, I may never be able to ...

Love your poem! As a fellow Bi I've always associated with purple, and I know a lot of other Bis do too. I don't know if this was intentional or ...

First, this piece had a really chilling aura, which I loved. And you are doing some fantastic things with word choice. There were quite a few grammar mistakes, but most ...

So, I'll start by saying I really enjoyed this piece. I love the simplicity of your writing. It's to the point and clear, but still beautiful and interesting. I did ...

Beautiful poem. It had an epic feel to it, and so I expected it to be longer. However, the fact that you were able to pull something like this off ...

Hey there! I'll start by saying I absolutely love your descriptions. They are beautiful, unique, and really set the tone for the chapter. I haven't looked at any of your ...

Wow. So this is the first chapter I read but I wasn't confused at all, which is a fantastic sign. You're description at the beginning did help a little though ...

Hey there! So I am coming into this halfway through, but I've found that lets me really focus on what's working in this chapter specifically, so here we go. First ...

I found this piece really interesting. The opening paragraph makes it come across as more of a satire piece than fiction though, but I'm trying to decide if I think ...

Hey there! So, having not read the previous chapters, I am obviously very confused. But, based on what I'm reading, I wonder how the pacing is working for your story. ...

Hey there, Reading through the other review, she said a lot of what I planned to say. I'll just second here by saying you have a lot of very complex ...

Hiya! Just wanted to return the favor for that awesome review you left for me. Overall this was a great prologue. I love the mystery you built here. I feel ...

Hey there, Happy review day! First off I love this take on Wolves and Vampires. It's fun to see how the wolves, though they look human, are still very wolf-like, ...

Hey first off I love how you introduced your story. We don't know where's running from and that gives us motivation to keep reading. I also felt like it was ...