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Okay, first I'd like to say that it was good. It was slightly confusing though. Is the MC's real name Lilly? Then why would he -- her brother? -- call ...

First off, the goodies. There's great emotion, and I love it! You can tell what's going on between the two. And I also love the last line. It brings humor ...

GREAT! I love it! I like the emotion, and it's wonderful! :D Nothing much to say after that though. :)

Hi! First off, the thing that made me not really want to read was the color of the text. It's really bright and makes it hard to read the words. ...

Great! Though I think you might want to move this in to the lyric sections. This seems more like a song than a poem. I think it's great, I don't ...

Hey, Undeadbunnie! I think your lyrics are great! Though, if you want to turn it into a real song, you need a chorus. I don’t know who I am I’ve ...

Great script! Is there a sequel to this? the plot is very interesting, a mix of supernatural and normal everyday family problems. No mistakes, though I think you should put ...

Well,I'm not too sure what contest this was submitted for, but I think it's great! I like how it said "She wanted to be..." at the end of each little ...

Hi Tinkembell! Is your prolouge a prolouge for a novel? If it is, then the idea seems good! Though I'm not too sure what the story is about, I think ...

Hi! I like this poem, because school is all about status. How one girl likes this one guy but he's so much popular so he can't like her, or something ...

I think the topic this poem is about is a very creative one. I'm not to sure if the people you're describing actual people, just that their names are scrambled ...

First off, I didn't read the first chapter. I'll try my best to understand what's going on though. Red is for any grammar, spelling, or the simple mistakes. Those in ...

You seem to like to write love poems. This is a great poem. I don't see any mistakes anymore. But the line "These eyes have cried for you" was kind ...

This poem is great! At first I didn't know who this girl was, until the very end of the poem. The description is very detailed. I could picture that girl's ...

Interesting... What is this supposed to be (Don't mean to be rude or anything)? Is this a discussion sort of thing? Because I think you have a point. But the ...