Tell me nothing’s going to fall from beneath me,
For my world is unsteady as it is
I need you to convince me that I felt something real
Then maybe I’d rest with your kiss.
All I want is for the trouble to leave,
For it keeps insisting on coming,
And though I tell it’s not welcome,
Somehow it always stays...
And I’m the one, who’s tearing apart,
From the guilt I felt from the start,
Why must you fall so fast?
And now I’m feeling shamed,
I’m the one to be blamed,
For I’m known for breaking hearts.
I walk by and shut out your glance,
And pretend you’re not even there,
The tension stirs up past memories,
I know deep down I don’t care-
for you, I never, I was lying to myself
But you fell so fast, and it never did last…
And I’m the one, who’s tearing apart,
From the guilt I felt from the start,
Why must you fall so fast?
And now I’m feeling shamed,
I’m the one to be blamed,
For I’m known for breaking hearts.
And I’m the one, who’s falling apart,
For I know I'd rewritten our rules,
Why must I be the fool?
And now I must be shamed,
I deserve the blame,
‘Coz we all know I stole your heart.
They’re breaking, breaking, breaking.
I’m taking, taking, taking,
Their soul, their mind, their passion, their hope,
They’re breaking, breaking, breaking,
‘Coz I’m the one who’s taking,
Their love.
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It's already in the lyric section.
Anyway, I kind of liked this even though I could not relate to anything in it
Oh, I was supposed to post this in the lyrics section! Whoops. XD
Great! Though I think you might want to move this in to the lyric sections. This seems more like a song than a poem. I think it's great, I don't see any mistakes.