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arianaSarroyo

arianaSarroyo

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Growth

    Why are my comments being posted multiple times?

    Jul 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Growth

    Hi there! :D I have to say, this was a pleasant surprise! I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite things were your vocabulary. The vocabulary you used here was colorful ...

    Jul 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Two symphonies

    Hello there :) I agree with the reviewer below me. I enjoyed reading this and all, but I feel as though you could make it better. Think of making it ...

    Jul 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Two symphonies

    Hello there :) I agree with the reviewer below me. I enjoyed reading this and all, but I feel as though you could make it better. Think of making it ...

    Jul 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Empress Fallen - Prologue

    Hi there.... :) I really liked reading this. Your words wwre very descriptive and for the most part, you carried your point across in a manner that was smooth. I ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: The GR-8 Discovery- Prologue

    Hello. I'm going to try to review this chapter even though I usually only review poems. Anyway, the title lured me into your piece. I was interested in what I'd ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Tides and Shallows

    Hello and welcome to YWS! :) You really pleased me here. I was not expecting to read this, but I am more than content with what I have read. From ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: brighter day

    Hi there... I have to say, this was a pleasure to read! It was well written, crisp ane the message was clear. There were a few grammatical issues such as ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there

    Well I have to say, that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I wasn't sure I'd like it L because of the title, but I am happy I opened this. You ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Lyrical Re: Butterfly Kisses

    Hello there. :-) I have to say, this is VERY short. However, in the few words you have posted there is a meaning. I would like to possibly read more, ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: No one to care

    Hi, and welcome to YWS. I see that we have a common interest in poetry. We both write rhyming poems about rejected and disenfranchised people, and I admire you for ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Fallacy

    I'll admit it's lengthy, but it was worth the read. I liked your overall feeling described here. In addition, your use of words and phrases was good. I also liked ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Dark Blue Eyes

    Hello there and welcoME TO YWS! On a completely unrelated note, I think tyour profile picture is very pretty. Anyway, moving on to the review. Overall, I was fond of ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Eternity

    Hi there Yazi... interesting name you have. Anyway, on to the poem. What did you mean when you advised readers not to be discouraged by the length? I thought the ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Collision

    Hi there and welcome to YWS. I agree with the other reviewer that this is a lovely piece. I read the title, expecting to read something much different than what ...

    Jun 27, 2013


"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind