ardentlyThieving

Hey hey Ali!!! Ardent! here for a reviews (so u shush in discord :P) First off, I'm currently listening to Victoria by Abney Park, which is kind of mood™ for ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a quick review between exams!!! Ooooh I'm a fan of this! It's a concept that gets used a lot in poems, but you did a ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a quick review between exams!!! I like your first paragraph. It sets the scene well and gives us a little bit of an idea of ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review so that YWS will stop recommending my own works to me.. First of all, I like this story a lot! It's a nice ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! I'm going to be completely honest, from your title I thought this was somehow related to the game where you have to murder ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! Saw your latest chapter in the green room and was like "hey cool, an elder scrolls fic". Then I realized how many other ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a late night review!!! (should I be sleeping? Yes. Am I going to keep reviewing? Also yes) I see the technical errors (grammar, punctuation etc.) ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a late night review!! Ya know what? Let's do this each lil story bit at a time. "Imagination is the reality of the dreamer."-- Scott ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! Figured reading this will give me pointers AND let me work closer to my sweet, sweet RevMo success and second star, and hey! ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! First off I wanna say that I like the idea behind this piece. The death of a family member who you never had ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! Gonna try a new format this time, so that's exciting. Where I agree with my fellow reviewers First of all, I (pun sort ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! Ah yes, the lovely 5 minute poem, a writing thing I am maybe a little too familiar with. I do think you could ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!! Ok, so when I saw this in the green room, I was really interested. I figured that as a Knight of The Green ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review and welcome to YWS!! It's always exciting to read the first works of new members, especially when they're still in the green room. ...

Hey hey, Ardently! here for a review!!! First of all, welcome to YWS. It's always great to see new members, and even better getting to read what they're written. And ...