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Hello, and happy review day! I really like this poem- it's simple, but it's still creepy. I feel like it's a little cliched, but I don't think you have to ...

Hello, This is a very nice poem. It's a style of poetry we don't see a lot of- more of a story. There are few stanzas, and no rhyming, but ...

Hello, This was a very good poem. The words flowed nicely and your vocabulary was great. Just a few things I would like to suggest. First off, you need to ...

Good afternoon, This was a really great poem! I enjoyed it a lot, and it was very well written. I have to admit, I wasn't sure what this was about ...

Hello there, This was a beautiful poem! You make your words flow well, and the imagery is great! I don't see anything I need to point out that you need ...

Hello there, This is a wonderful poem! You do a great job with the words you use! The rhyming is amazingly done! The imagery is very well done as well. ...

Hello, Amazing work! Wonderful imagery... I especially like the line "delicate as their boughs take dips to the earth." It makes me smile, it's very pretty. I can't seem to ...

Hello- This story is pretty cool! You do a great job putting a story into such a short few paragraphs. I agree with mynameswriter that a backstory would be nice, ...

Hi!- This is a great poem! I’ll review stanzas that I thought needed some work or were just really pretty. “I had a dream In which I saw Someone speaking ...

Hello there! This is a good piece. It’s very expressive, and you make the words flow works very well. You describe everything in good detail, but you don’t make it ...

Hi! I'm glad you wrote this! I know this isn't the first thing that comes to mind when someone says "holocaust" or "Death camp". This perspective is not very commonly ...

Hello, This is a beautiful piece! I love the emotion in it, and overall story. You say at the beginning that this doesn't have a flow to it, but I ...