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Yeah that was my LEAST favorite line. I wanted to change it but my sister liked it for some reason, and said well ask your readers livy. So I'm working ...

Thank you!

Yeah... I was worried about it being to vague with the metaphor. It was supposed to emulate a marriage deteriorating (as the narrator wife had an affair, so that's what ...

Oh and the quotes for some of stanzas are off because I made some changes right before this review, so you can re-read this poem too it might make things ...

Hi Stellarjay! Well the second stanza was the one that worried me the most, it purposely was supposed to be open for interpretation as to what the storm was (my ...

Thank you for your post! I loved everything you say.

yeah... don't remember writing this. Might have had a panic attack while writing it, because I don't remember falling asleep at my desk, might have ask around to see if ...

Yeah, I don't remember writing this... maybe I was having a panic attack while I was writing it, because normally during those things I kind of sort of black out... ...

THANK YOU!!!!!! I'm glad you liked it.

Oh it%u2019s not based on me just someone I knew.

Anytime anne27. You're very talented.

You're welcome! Welcome to Young Writer's Society

Anytime! If you would like I could follow you and you could follow me! We can help review each others poems. I think you're very talented for your age. Even ...

You're welcome!

You're welcome! You're very talented for your age.