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Thanks, Hannah and Prokaryote! This was one part that threw me off. Up until this part, the 'you' parts didn't put me off, but this part, shoving 'they remind you ...

Thank you for the review! Punctuation is not a friend of mine...I can't stand it. I'll try to figure something out. Also: *facepalm* I spelled [s]necrophilia[/s] fishophilia incorrectly. :shock: Woops

Hi everyone! Thank you ALL so much for the positive and helpful feedback! I really appreciate it. Also, thanks aloe for the great help! A few little things though I ...

Hurrah! This version was much more captivating! You definitely succeeded this time around, as far as I'm concerned. ;) Couple things here and there: Down are his chambers of dark ...

Hi Sarah! Thanks so much for going over this. I'll edit it as soon as I get some free time today. I'm really loving all of these in-depth reviews. It's ...

Thanks to you all for reveiwing this :D And hurray for jMin! You figured out why I wrote it like that ;) *anti-pop

Hi guys! Thanks for looking over my poem. lol I'm well-aware of it's utter...idiocy? Reading over it this morning I'm saying to myself, 'What is this?' So sorry guys, for ...

Hi, Squall :D I see exactly what you mean about this 'telling' rather than 'showing'. Once I have some free time, I will most likely rewrite this with your critique ...

Thank you both Insomnia and Andy so very much for the reviews! I really appreciate all that you guys pointed out. I'm so glad you both took the time to ...

Hi, Kyte! *shakes hand* Thanks for pointing out the names! I honestly didn't notice that! Those are just the names that came to me xD For now though, they will ...

Hi lordgluzman! I don't really know why I wrote this poem. When I wrote it, I wasn't actually thinking about it at all; I just kind of let the words ...

Hi mnesomeye! Hurray for you!! *gives mnesomeye a cookie* You figured it out ;) It wasn't originally supposed to be her, but I figured that if people read 'My Dear ...

Hi, June! :D First off: I didn't steal your story, I promise! But now that you mention it I'm really anxious to read it! I'm glad you liked it (I've ...

Hey, Ducati! Thanks a LOT for pointing those things out....can't believe I missed that first one (haha, eating a paper) :P I really appreciate it! As for the debate over ...

Thank you all so much for the reviews! *hugs you all* *hands mnesomeye a hankie* :D Yes, the mail carrier/postman/whatever scene wasn't vital, but I needed it to get the ...