anti-pop

Hi Stori :) Well, this is relatively short. Not a problem! She certainly planned on it. Now, if only she didn't have to bring Kevin... I would just take out ...

These books called Fablehaven. The plot (as Spiderwick-y as it may be) is good, but all the characters speak as though they're walking encyclopedias. It annoyed me to no end. ...

CARLISLE: [walks down the stairs to see JASPER, EMMET, ROSALIE, and ALICE clawing at BELLA, who’s screaming.] Oh golly! What is this mess? You silly kids, I was trying to ...

Hey niccy. :D On to the requested review. “You got lost? Oh you poor thing, please take a seat, you have not missed much dear.” Coma after 'much'. My eyes ...

Hi niccy! I'm off to read chapter 2 like you requested (sorry for the ridiculously long wait). This was very intriguing! I really enjoy your description and dialogue. I laughed ...

Hey kissthewitch! I'm so incredibly sorry for the delay. *sigh* On to the review. :!: This was... different to say the least; but not in a bad way. I was ...

Hi evan :) I really like this style. I've reread it many times in different ways; each time I'm satisfied because the poem turns out to be what I want ...

I could not feel my legs anymore. They were weak and shaking . M y back hurt [s]some[/s] so much I was barely able to keep myself straight . [s]and ...

Hey Evi! I laughed out loud when I read this. Honestly. How did you come up with this? Absolutely brilliant! The rhythm was lovely and felt incredibly natural. You seem ...

Hi Loose! Pleased to meet you. I'm anti-pop! *bows* First things first: In my current location it is fairly late in the night (or early in the morning), and so ...

Hi, Meep! :D I am anti-pop, and I shall be your critique today. Pleased to meet you! *bows* “Class dismissed , ” [s]Mr Reynolds announced,[/s] announced Mr. Reynolds, arranging the ...

Hi Mistress! This chapter was was written so much better. Your grammar and punctuation improved tenfold. You were also using a slightly wider vocabulary and you managed to expand on ...

Hey Mistress! First off: This was much more satisfying than the prologue! I'm really interested into what the story has to offer now. However, I am sad to say that ...

Hey Winter! I'm a pretty big fan of scripts. There's just something about this style of writing that makes everything more entertaining. I'm also a big, hypocritical fan of Twilight! ...

Hey TL! Sorry for the incredibly long delay...but here it is! ‘Druuuuuuuth. We looked at it all yesterday.’ Like CastlesInTheSky noted, at the moment it seems like chat-speak. Try something ...