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Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. Three hours in the air had led them to this. The sky was dark gray, the grass was covered by a ...

Oh, my gosh. June! I'm tearing up! I truly am. This is so beautifully tragic... my heart feels like it has been ripped from my chest! I can't possibly critique ...

You automatically get a gold star. Dude, this is exactly how I feel when I play. Especially the part where it takes them a flippin' HOUR to walk through their ...

Love the repetition. Rhyming was spot-on. However , I have to make up for that awful critique earlier, right? I believe that you could do so much more with this. ...

I've come to find that I have all but fallen in love with the way you write. I think that poetry should express how the author feels, and it shouldn't ...

Hi, Cant Stop The Beat! Nice to meet you. Welcome to YWS! :D On to the review: She was nineteen. She had been playing since she was five, after she ...

[s]Being a girl and all,[/s] I had to take a shower and smell good for the first day, so I hurriedly showered and dressed in a blue, short-sleeved shirt, skin ...

Hi Mistress! Wow, there has been a lot of improvement! I'm very impressed. This newer version is definitely more enjoyable than the first. Still, I would highly advise taking the ...

Darn it! Sakura said everything I was going to! Down to the 'ripping open the envelope' thing! *sigh* Ah, well. Just makes my job easier then, huh? ;) Apart from ...

Chapter 1: Confessions Dear Diary, I'm 14 years old and a freshman at Parkway South. I don't really have [s]much[/s] many friends, just a few best friends who help me ...

With a back (no hyphen here) pack full of paper, she sat down (no coma here) and emptied the contents onto her desk. The first bell of the morning rang, ...

Hey huggybear! *hugs* L: *cough* fag *cough* and Misa: (through broken window) Hey KIRA! You left your DEATH NOTE in my car you jerk! (skips away singing Misa wins, Misa ...

Oh, a strict rhyme scheme throughout the entire piece? An obvious and clearly expressed subject? Who are you and what have you done with God?! Just kidding. I really enjoyed ...

The snow came, blanketing the earth in sparkling white crystals. The bare trees reached to the sky, their branches extended like arms, imaginary heads thrown back in silent screams as ...

Good morning, TW! I'm anti-pop. Pleased to meet you. All of my corrections will be in red . Nemera woke up to the [s]siren[/s] wail of her alarm clock. She ...