Published January 16, 2009
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L: Light, What are you doing in there! You've been in the bathroom for over an hour, and I have to peee!
Light: Hold on, I'm just writing names in my Death Note, just give me a sec...
L: WHAT!?!
Light: Uhh, Umm, Oh shit!
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(Light is sitting in a clasroom, staring out the window listlessly as a notebook falls down. When the class is let out Light hurries and picks it up and takes it home, because its OBVIOUSLY the right thing to do to bring home random trash you find lying around the school yard)
Light: Hmm, what IS this? (scratches head) Aww, it's written in english. Oh well. (opens it up) So how do you do this (reads front pages) Damn it! The only words I can make out are "write name and here" Okay (Light signs his name in the note book) Well that was a waste of time (chucks notebook in to trash can)
(40 seconds later)
Light: (clutches chest dramatically and starts having very serious convulsions on his floor) OH crap Im dying(dies)
Ryuk: (poofs out of nowhere)Youve seem to taken a liking to-(looks down at Light) Wow. Humans are a riot!
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(Light and L are talking)
Misa: Light! Light! Guess what! Guess What!
Light: Hold ON Misa, I'm in the middle of a conversation.
Misa: *Gasps* LIGHT! I've been waiting here for a whole freakin' hour for you to say some thing to me!
Light: Didn't you just get here?
Misa: Well, ANYWAY (glares at Light), Misa got you a new outfit, for our date on Friday!
Light: (peeks in bag )What are you trying to do to me, Misa, you know I can only wear Abercrombie and Fitch!
L: *cough* fag *cough*
Misa: You don't like it? I was sure you would like it. It's so your style and -
Light: Look Misa Just get it out of here! (kicks the bag)
Misa: Oh so you are going to ignore half the time I'm around and when you do pay attention to me youre gonna be mean to me?
Light: Well, nobody invites you! Youre ALWAYS barging in through my door! I mean what if I was NAKED for pete's sake!
Misa: Whose this 'Pete' person? Somebody I should know about?!
Light: GO AWAY!
Misa: FINE! ( Misa stomps away as Light follows her and bumps in to a table that has a big chocolate cake with strawberries on it)
L: I. Was. Going. To. Eat. That. Cake. (Turns slowly towards Light)
Light: Don't look at me! It's Misa fault!
L: (Is speechless because he is giving Light the beat down, but is interrupted by the sound of the window shattering. A small leather notebook appears on the floor)
Misa: (through broken window) Hey KIRA! You left your DEATH NOTE in my car you jerk! (skips away singing Misa wins, Misa wins)
Light: Uhhh, A death note! Whatever could that be ?
L: You are not very good at bluffing, Light-kun. You are jthe classic example of an affluent child who hates to lose.
Light: *thinking* Damn! (Light thens throw himself against wall and lets out a very creepy yet hilarious cackle) Bwa ha ha ha Youre right- I AM KIRA. (throws a tempure tantrum)
L: Uhh, arent you a little old for tantrums? I mean seriously -
Light: (carries on with the tantrum) I R GOD! Me is SHINI- GAMI! Bow down to KIRA! Bwa ha ha ha
(L backs away slowly as 2 men from the insane asylum come and give Light a giant shot and take him to the funny farm where he belongs)
L: (turns on laptop and holds down a special button used to page Watari) Watari?
Watari: Yes Ryuzaki?
L: Can you bring in some cake?
Watari: Yes I'm on my way.
L: Sweet!
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I was expecting something a little serious since it deals with Light and L after all but it was pretty funny. Thanks for making me laugh ^ ^.
Genuis genuis genuis! I love it! I would give a longer review, but I must depart the computer, I will soon review again. XD
Hi! (loud guwaffs) Miss, haha, Summer, ha, Night at your, hahah, service!
That was hilarious!
L: Light, What are you doing in there! You've been in the bathroom for over an hour, and I have to peee!
Light: Hold on, I'm just writing names in my Death Note, just give me a sec...
L: WHAT!?!
Light: Uhh, Umm, Oh shit!
That part killed me!
Light: (carries on with the tantrum) I R GOD! Me is SHINI- GAMI! Bow down to KIRA! Bwa ha ha ha
Hahaha genius!
Greetings people of YWS!
im confused. you said "4" ways. i only see 3 here.... o.O. they are funny as hell though xD i always thought he should be found out because someone had to take a pee and he was writing in the bathroom :p
Well hey, I just read your fanfic and I have to agree with everyone else. This really is a good one. My friend actually got me hooked on Deathnote a couple days ago and I love it so when I saw this, I had to check it out. Oh and I'm so new at this so I;m not quite sure how to put qotes down but i like the qotes:
((Damn it! The only words I can make out are "write name and here"))
This was really funny. I liked the 3rd part.
Can't wait to read more!
A really good Death Note Parody. I can't think of anything else to say.
Good job, keep it up!
(Sorry, this is so little...)
Oh my god that was great. Me and my brother are huge Death Note fans, and even he smiled at your writing. I especially liked the "fag" diss because it's so true!! And I liked the part where Misa comes in at the weirdest times just to do nothing, because that's what happened in the series. Great job, but I was confused at the end because the subtitle box says "4 ways..." and there are only three. But nice job.
This. Was. Hilarious! Great job, everyone needs a laugh once in a while. Continue with these funny writings!
Hi! I'm surprised (and happy) that I got so many reviews! Well, I just wanted to announce that I will be writing another Death Note piece similar to this (but a million times better) Just wanted to let you know that I'm about to start! *hugs* Bye!
hahahahahhahaha omg hahahahahaha rofl
that was GREAT!!! I love it.
Especially these parts:
L: (turns on laptop and holds down a special button used to page Watari) Watari?
Watari: Yes Ryuzaki?
L: Can you bring in some cake?
Watari: Yes I'm on my way.
L: Sweet!
xD
Light: (peeks in bag )What are you trying to do to me, Misa, you know I can only wear Abercrombie and Fitch!
L: *cough* fag *cough*
(seriously my favorite part)
This is seriously creative and funny. write more!
Light and fluffy, huggy. I'm glad you did not get to the second part, which doesn't exist to the likes of me. Problem with it, Light is not that way. L is not like that. Misa is... well sorta like that.
Light being all serious and accidently speaking his frequent internal dialogues would be hilarious. Especially the 'JUST AS PLANNED' part in the helicopter, about a foot away from L. Or when he does that demonic grin in front of everyone. Light on the toilet writing down names is just... horrible, considering the circumstances.
I guess you get points for originality, but I'd have played on so many key flaws with Light that the humor would be for those who watch deeply. Then again, the anime made Light so stupid, I can't help but crack up when I see the death note swimming lesson bit. So who am I to say.
O.o
Wow I watch Death Note sometimes and normally find it all serious so I never watch it for long. And when I saw yet another Death Note fan fiction I finally decided to read one and I'm glad I did, because this was laugh out loud, gut buster. I started laughing so hard my Mom came in and gave me this are you crazy look. Man thanks for writing this I need a good laugh!!!
Not to mention the first time I watched Death Note I wondered why Misa wouldn't just punch Light for being a douche bag!! I'm mean honestly he doesn't have to be mean!!
LOL!!
It was soo funny. I have to say I loved how you made fun of Light, specially in the first one. HILARIOUS!.
Good job!, I also loved that Misa got all mad at Light and just took revenge. Nice job!
Hey huggybear! *hugs*
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I laughed out loud during those parts! xD
As for my review: I thought it was hilarious! I'm a huge Death Note fan, and I'm a fan of making fun of Death Note!
I think it being in script-style made it even funnier.
If you want a serious, nit-picky-grammar-Nazi review, let me know! I'd love to help. I just figured this was all in good fun as a parody.
*Gold stars*
*anti-pop
Thanks for your reviews! I never thought I'd get any. Oh, by the way, sorry If you dont like how I portrayed the characters, but again this is just a parody and Im just happy to have reviews xD
As a fan im not only allowed to laugh I am encouraged to this is really funny and had some very good points made about the show. Misa did always seem to show up when she wasn't wanted and light was kind of mean to her on more than one occasion good job dude.
Hee hee...I was laughing while reading the first one. I always imagined Light getting caught on the toilet...*snicker*. As a very faithful DeathNote fan, I'm not allowed to laugh..But I can't help it.
Haha, I love the Light clothing diss. It's so true, I had the exact same thoughts when reading the manga. xD
Total amusement aside, you really must rate this PG-13 or higher for cusses. Sorry, it's the rules. Also, could you remove the all-caps in your sub-title? It's kind of annoying. And I'm not really sure what kind of reviews you're after for this? There's not much more to say than "lol true" (what I just did).
Thanks for the chuckle -- Light is so much fun to make fun of. ^_^
~Sumi
Lol. This is pretty funny, actually.
I think you should title it "Death Note Parody" instead. I was expecting some serious story where Light creates his Utopia or something ^_^
I especially like the part about light only wearing Abercrombie.
Just a friendly reminder-
You should give this a rating of PG-13. Some people may be offended by words such as "fag" and "shit".
Good job. ^_^