anti-pop

Hello, Moriah! Here as requested. Now, because I really enjoyed reading this, I'm going to give you a hard time, ok? Don't take it personally, I just tend to be ...

Hey, lordgluzman! :) Nice emotion here! Really powerful. I love the calm rift in the middle; those are always really important when a song is trying to make a big ...

Wow. Long. O.O I would love to review this, but perhaps piece by piece. Tip: You're not going to get many reviews if your posts are this long! Posts longer ...

Hiya, Pen. :D This was so wonderful, Pen. Girls should read this and realize they just need to love themselves for who they are! I know this certainly made me ...

Hi, Miss Evi! I would love to do a great big review on this, but a.) we're both short on time and b.) there's really nothing to fix. The length ...

Hi, Rosey! :D This was extremely original, first off. I'm surprised! You definitely took the prompt in a totally different direction than I would have originally thought. Way to go! ...

Hola, Evi! :D I'm here to return the favor. Also, congratulations! You get my 100th review! *throws confetti* First, let me start off by saying this: Don't begin a piece ...

How wonderful it is, the sonorous melody This line break here is awkward. Consider having "the sonorous melody of music as one line." of music. The resonant hum of each ...

Hey, cooldude. :D WATCH OUT! This is just a nit-pick, but I just think this would look better If it wasn't all caps. I think italics would look cleaner, and ...

June said everything that needs to be said. This was marvelous! The mood was most definitely lighter in this when compared to the last 'Perceptional Poetry' piece. I'm glad you ...

Hi asxz. :) Here as requested. For a prologue, this was rather spectacular. Prologues, I find, are normally a bit vague and crammed with foreshadowing that we aren't supposed to ...

Hi Stori! Here as requested. I couldn't find any nit-picks, which is great. Your grammar was good and your vocabulary was fresh. :arrow: Your dialogue, on the other hand, was ...

Hi, Pippie. Here to finally uphold your request. :) Chocolate, that’s what I need. That was a good line. It lightens the mood a bit by reminding us that she's ...

I was really stuck on how to continue as it was one of those things that I just started writing without knowing where it was going. I came up with ...

Hi, Pippiedooda (tee-hee! Fun name!) Here as requested. Just a heads-up: I don't read other critiques, so if I say something that was already mentioned, please forgive me. 1. The ...