anshira

Hello. I really lked your story and am well sort of looking forward to chapter two. The 'darling' descriptive words you used were quite in place. A few errors: " ...

Hello, hope you find my review informative. Firstly, a good topic to write about. Many people don't get appreciated until their talents are discovered. You have used quite a number ...

Hello and hope you find my review informative. Firstly, I would like to say that this topic you have chosen is one that has been deliberated on before but you ...

Hi, hope you find your review informative. Love your starting- a good one for your poem. The ending' s fantastic too. I like the mystery you have stated here- you ...

Hello, hope my review helps. I loved your starting- it gives a very good opening for your poem. I love the way you have described the emotions. A lot of ...

Hello, hope you find my review informative. As others have said, you have really represented this disease in this poem very well. " Watch the scale-- .down-down-down." Check the punctuation ...

A very touching and emotional poem. The starting and ending of this poem is just superb. Another thing I like is the topic you' ve selected- not one usually written ...

I agree with ' blackwood' and the first thing I thought of was: why is this in poetry?? A very nice and well written piece of work. You have described ...

Quite an interesting story. Though I don't get the title's relationship to the story- maybe because I started reading from chapter 18. Very descriptive adjectives used and a lot of ...

Hello, hope you find this review informative. To start of with, I liked your poem. My first reaction was ' Oh, oh' but as I read through I loved it. ...

To start of with, it is a superb poems. Describes each scene to its fullest. It' s wonderfully written and each stanza suits its position. Its arrangement is great as ...

Hello, hope you find my review informative. I really don't have much time today so excuse me if I miss something out or the review is too short. A really ...

Anshira here for a review! A wonderfully written poem describing each scene to its fullest. I love the exciting verbs that you have used. I also like the way you ...

Hi, hope you find my review helpful. I love this poem and the depth of this poem is lovely. The other things you have written are amazing as well. One ...

Hi, I certainly love your poem. It' s marvellous and thanks for a good read. I love your arrangement of the poem and and the rhyming words. Great poem, I ...