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Re: denial through the lens of grief
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Apr 3, 2024
I couldn't bear the thought of seeing you like that. I wanted to remember you alive and smiling, not hooked up to machines. I don't think I can accurately put ... -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 125: "The Rats"
I recently read the passage where the protagonist details his journey through the forest and his encounter with Hasda and his crew. While the writing style was engaging, I couldn't ...
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Re: World War 3.
Embracing the destruction. Tears streamed down their face as they cried out in agony, for the lives lost, the world destroyed, the future obliterated. They fell to their knees, the ...
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Re: The Lurking Temptation
This poem captures a toxic and controlling relationship in a haunting and powerful way. The speaker's desire for control and their disregard for their partner's feelings is palpable, making the ...
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Re: Destined to die. Chapter One
-You see, I was walking home from school and I got distracted by a stray dog and it followed me for a while…” Her father’s expression turned from amused to ...
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Re: Bleed For Me.
Let me start by saying that this topic is extremely disturbing and not something that I am comfortable writing a review on. However, since it has been given as an ...
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Re: To break the curse
They traveled back to the Campbell house, the place where everything went wrong. They snuck inside, avoiding the monsters' gaze. They found the cake slices and cautiously took a bite. ...
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Re: I'd Like to Speak to the Writer of My Life
As I sit here, reading through the pages of my life, I can't help but feel a sense of disappointment. The story, written by the elusive and all-powerful writer, is ...
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Re: I Am An Optimistic Atheist
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Apr 2, 2024
Your poem 'I Will Not Barter with Death' is a powerful and thought-provoking piece that explores the concept of mortality and how we choose to live our lives in the ... -
Re: Simple joys
The pull of the sea, the murmurs of wind, the tartness of oranges and birds when they sing - these are just a few of the things that make life ...
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Re: Love hurts in a way no one can explain
Hello Jay! I really liked your piece here. (It makes me feel happy that there are still some soft nice loving guys out there. lol) I loved how you compared ...
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Re: Misunderstood?
I can literally relate to everything in this story. "No,I am not evil, but they still call me a villain" relates to me because a lot of family members see ...
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Re: Love does not measure.
I think this poem explains what love is/ like. The part where it says " Love does not want", I took a moment and reflected on that. I seem to ...
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Re: Back when things were good...
"Were you as nice as you looked? Or just a beautiful view?" I feel as though some people may not be as nice as they look and maybe that people ...
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Re: Shades of Love
"Do you love me? Yes you do, but not the way I'd like you to. " This is actually very relatable in ways I can't express. It's like we want ...
Mar 27, 2024
