angel23

Hi, firstly I would like to say that your poem is very easy to relate to. Every ones in a while we think how we would look like if we ...

This was deep! I really enjoyed this part: "Now I got you forever, and you wish that you never ever , girl you know you wish that you never... cheated ...

I can't say anything different from the others. This poem had a smooth flow. I enjoyed every word :smt001 As for the tittle I think "As time goes by" would ...

I really like this poem for the meaning it has. Especially this part which I found inspirational: " I never knew this road was so long, until I walked it. ...

Hi, this is the first poem I've seen that's this short; I like how its straight to the point and how it doesn't follow the basic syllable count and other ...

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this! I read the whole time without loosing interest and that's really good, really! I enjoyed how you waited till the last minute to let ...

You have an interesting trail of thought and the tittle: Crazy this Cow? Aren't you the crazy one here? It was really funny though- how the narrator wants to kill ...

I liked it, very simple :smt001 and yet the imagery gets across just as good as it would in a complicated haiku. The syllable count is perfect and I wouldn't ...

This is an amusing poem made me smile :). If this were true you know how many "Alice's" there would be confined in their room?Over all it was real nice, ...

Hi I'm angel23 and I'm going to review your work :smt001 This review is quite long but it should help you out some! Well firstly I'm gonna start off by ...

Hi there :wink: today has been stressful ugh! OK so as I was reading along I really like the imagery you used and you're really appealing to peoples emotions!Over all ...

Hey its Angel23 :) I see your poem is quite popular, and of course I couldn't help but comment. So below you will see quite a few changes. Their just ...

Hi this is a very nice piece you wrote.Alls I can say is watch where you place the commas. It can have a major effect on the rythm of the ...

I can see that you had an ardour topic in mind; religion and the human interaction are common topics yet complex to portray.I believe you should add more imagery to ...

I am the type of person to focus more on the meaning of a work than on its grammar. In my openion if this were a book I would not ...