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Re: The Ghost who plays the piano...
I love this. I loved the beginning and the middle the best. It's one of the best poetry I've actually read on YWS, and I review mostly poetry as I ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: A Peeled Orange
This is the most random, funniest things I've on here. It's so silly and crazy it made me lol so much. You're a good writer, especcially for making something that ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Soul of the Storm
Hmmm... I liked it, I could tell you put a lot of thought into it. Half way through I was confused on what was going on though I still carried ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: The One Person
I noticed a few grammar issues here. I'm afraid I am in a picky mood so I am really sorry. The one person I can relie on. In red should ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Echo
I can't say I like this so much. But I can't say I hate this. I do think it's pretty good. I have to say I liked your sentences in ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 1
You have done the girl right. I liked it and it's so something I would read, being a 15 year old girl. I did like it and most of the ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Georgia
This is very deep and I liked it. But I have to be picky on the way you laid it out, I didn't really get a good feel for it ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all?
I really enjoyed this. Yes, it is quite dark but I liked it. Maybe you could put the top part before your title (where all the smiley faces are) in ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: She waited...
This is really good. You may need some more work on it and more thought. Also, even though it is nowhere near the poem itself, the spelling in spoiler needs ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: No name
This needs to be expanded. Way too short and very hard to review when you only have four lines to comment on. You seriously need to put more effort in ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Unless it's you
Wow, I don't usually read lyrics but I decided to review this. And boy did I do right by clicking on this. It was very heart-felt and I felt like ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Like 98'
I really enjoyed this. It's really good and nothing that I'd normally read but now I found that when I started I couldn't finish! I only wanted to point out ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: We All Fall Down
To be honest, I disagree with this whole thing. I really don't believe what you have wrote is actually happening and it's just the way I think. I don't believe ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Drowning Too Soon...?
I thought what you wrote here was so effective and even though it was really short it was so effective and pulls the reader in. But what you do need ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Your Uncle Does What?!
Hello, I have came to do some reviewing. I think this is pretty good. I like how you've done it as a diary type and laid out like one, which ...
Oct 16, 2011