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Re: Delete
Hello! This is a nice piece of poetry though I feel that it is quite short.I think you were at a lack of words to express your feelings.I would like ...
Sep 26, 2014 -
Re: I miss...
Hello! Wao! Now this poem of yours is simply awesome.I am in love with it.I could actually relate to the theme of the is really good.Thank you so very much ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: Changes
Hello! It is a really nice piece of poetry.I like the whole theme of seems kind of different and unique to is a pure fantasy but I think you should ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: it
Hello! I like the basic thought of the poem and that highlighting of 'it' makes it look more attractive.It's a nice yet simple thought.But, it's seems more of a kind ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: forever doesn't remember us
It's cute and short.yes, you are right, forever is not actually forever.Nothing stays with us forever not even matter how much we love someone or something, one day we are ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: If a Rose..
Hello and welcome to YWS.Even I am new here and it really feels weird to write a review.But, this is really good.The combination of a few sentences can really mean ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think
This poem is really is sweet and cute in its own way and I love made me smile so, thanks for writing this poem and making me smile.I love the ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: Those chains
I like the way you have portrayed the feelings of an introvert person.The poem does not contain rhyming words at all.It's good like that.But, I think it would be better ...
Sep 23, 2014
