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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: So I'll Let Them Shout

    Hey there. So, the first stanza stands out the most to me. "But honey I'll still take 'em, with my demons I will plea, I'll swing without a rhythm." Probably ...

    Mar 22, 2019

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Six Word Sadness

    Hey you I haven't been doing reviews for awhile so I thought maybe I'd get back into the swing of things with something short. First impressions: I kinda took a ...

    Oct 12, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: 40 Meters Ahead

    Hey there! Seeing as this work has already been bumped out of the green room and thoroughly seen through by a couple of other reviewers, I might not have heaps ...

    Jul 3, 2017

  • Poetry » Narrative, Satire
    Re: Life And Death (Spoken Word Poem)

    Hii! Welcome to YWS:) I'm glad you chose to post here. Spoken word poetry is something that greatly interests me, but it isn't entirely my field of knowledge. Though, through ...

    Mar 26, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: the feeling of nothingness

    truthfully, I really don't mind this. this is probably my favorite of yours, above lyrics and chapters and all. (I have a lott of thoughts on this so uiflgAwckuxjhsfbe bearwithme ...

    Mar 20, 2017

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: Responsibilities of an 18 year old

    Heeeey there! I'll go ahead and put my thoughts in on this. Firstly, (this is probably a smaller nitpick,) you've published this under Novel / Chapter, which gives off an ...

    Mar 15, 2017


  • firstly: whaaaaattt?? I read this over last night, this morning, and twice just now and I'm having the most magnificent time trying to make sense of this, because it just ...

    Feb 26, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Ugly Words

    there are a few things i'd like the cover in this review, so i'll get on to it.:) the main problem i had with this poem is that it has ...

    Feb 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Atlas

    At last, I've found you. a phrase uttered many, many times before by regulars, actors, and authors and all the people. Nothing's new under the sun with this one, and ...

    Feb 24, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Between these telephone poles

    hey hey. i'm on mobile so i won't bother with fancy stuff and whatever, but i wanted to offer my two cents. "I wish to be a sound wave pulsating ...

    Feb 7, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Sweet Teeth

    hellooo! this caught my eye, and i really like it. so i figure instead of being lazy, i may as well participate in review day and review this. i want ...

    Jan 29, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: a little like you

    so i've come again, as promised. i'm beginning to feel as if i owe you, and so i'll try my best and get my thoughts and opinions through here. atmospherically, ...

    Jan 21, 2017

  • Art » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: The Pain Will End

    i'm with @Pumpkinhead for the most part here. it could be different for others though, but you make self-harm sound exciting, and that's really not what people should be reading ...

    Jan 15, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: fragments of us left in january

    okay, so i did already read this, but i was fairly distracted and wasn't able to concentrate much on giving any advice to you, so perhaps this will be able ...

    Jan 8, 2017

  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Humor
    Re: Into the Glass

    I'm going to start with the looks and abouts first: in the description you said you were experimenting a bit, and that is, of course, always good. but the thing ...

    Dec 31, 2016


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