ambersmith12172011

Hello, My name is Amber, and I wanted to tell you this is really good. I can feel your passion and rage in this. I really like your line: I ...

Hello, As now this is cute.

Hello, I'm Amber, and I wanted to tell you that this is really good. It got me to think about how life is, and how life can be short. Also ...

Hello, I really like this. It makes me think of my Mimi. My Mimi is my great grandmother. She was the one who raised me. She was my best friend. ...

Hello, This is really good. I could see it playing in my head when I was reading. I can't wait to read more of your work. It got me to ...

Hello, Aw, this is really good. It's like how everyone has an angel and devil side to them. I believe that, that is one reason why guys like about women. ...

Wow, so full of emotion. It reminds me of a friend of mine writing. I miss him but its ok. Thank you being you and reminding me of him. Your ...

Thank you for you review. The day i wrote this was on my cousin's birthday.

Thank you, :) The sad things is that the first post was an idea from a teacher. She didn't think that my first draft was good enough.

Here is the other version WHY DID THIS DAY HAVE TO COME? WHY DID IT HAVE TO HAPPEN? WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DO WHAT THEY DID? WHY DID YOU ...

Thank you for the review, i will keep what you said in mind.

Thank you for yrhe review. I will keep that in mind i have another versien of this poem, that might a little better. If you wqbt to read that one ...

Very interesting. I want to know what happens next. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your work.

I like what i read. I want to read more about what happens next. You have a real talent for writing and getting someone attention. Hope to read more of ...

I really like it. You had me from the begaining and never lost my attention. Can't wait for more.