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I agree, this poem is very confusing and different. It does have potential, I just think that you should make it a bit easier to understand. This poem is very ...

This was very....I guess the best word to use would probably be honest. I like how it speaks to me. It's easy to relate to, well to understand anyway. I ...

I liked this. Some of the words seemed a bit forced, let it flow a bit more. This was really good, it reminded me of a friend and his relationship. ...

Amazing. Such raw emotion. I'm jealous that you can make the words come to life so easily. It was riveting, really, very strong emotion. I like how simple it is, ...

This was...heartbreaking. The title captured my attention instantly. At first, I thought you would be pointing the gun at the other person, but it was a surprise how it was ...

Frankly not that much of a spoiler for Mockingjay (which ROCKS! just a btw). But I like how you captured Finnick but I think Katniss would have actually attacked him ...

This is an awesome poem. I love the raw emotion in it. Good job portraying the scene. One thing though, you might want to consider different wording, it seemed a ...

This piece was a bit confusing. I disagree with some of the words and the visuals that I got; for example: she knows it isn't the brightest idea, I thought ...

How very violent. I have to ask, why so violent anyway? I think either you have a lot of anger built up or you are really creative. There were minor ...

I don't know how to reply so I'll do my best. One thing is I love the creativity and passion in this poem. There were a few minor errors but ...

I agree with carbonCore. The story seems a little rushed. I love the creativity and the surprises. But I want to know about this girl. Why is she shy? What's ...

I liked this a lot. It was well-made and fun to read. (no offense) I did notice how it sometimes felt forced, like the rhythm was disturbed. I think this ...

This was an interesting poem. I liked the rythm and the way you used your words. The poem flowed really well and you did a great job with this. Keep ...

I really liked this poem. It struck me as well made and was easy to relate to. I like the last two lines and their rhyming, it added a little ...

I like how you can instantly see what potential this poem has. There were a few grammerical mistakes. I enjoyed reading this and I think that it's relatable and heart-wrenching. ...