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Re: Only Hope
Wonderful poem! I really like it! It has a nice flow and it rhymes nicely. Good topic! I love this! Good job and keep up the great work!
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Re: Average Teenage Mentality?
Not bad! Very true! I agree with you 100%! I like the poem a lot. Good job and keep on writing!
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Time for a change?
Harsh ye truthful in a way. It's a nice poem and has a nice flow. The format is very different and unique, I like it. Keep on writing!
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: .
Thanks to all of you! I must admit I'm in a very cliche situation right now. I'm not the best poet. I know almost nothing about poetry and I'm just ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Expectations Falling
I really like it. I don't always read about this and it is very easy to relate to. Lovely poem! Keep up the good work!
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: White lines
Amazing poem! Wonderful flow and you rhyme beautifully. This has a lot of potential. Just work on punctuation and capitalization. It's a serious topic and you did a really good ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Love. It's all i think about!!
It's a sweet poem. I like it a lot. Nice job!
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Before You Know It
You're writing is deep, beautiful, and intriguing. It's like a look into your mind. Very unexpected!
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Liar
I love it! The poem just has great flow and rhymes nicely.
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Toleration.
Wow, I think this awsome. I really liked it. I think this poem is very descriptive and emotional. All I can say is I thought it was a wonderful poem. ...
May 23, 2011 -
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I really like it. I can relate to it and it isn't bad at all. Good job!
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: .
Thank you for that review. On the pucation problem, I made the choice not to use puncation. Now I've been given advice to use puncation but some people have told ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Angst
I really love this poem. I can relate to it. I like the flow of the poem and I thought your words were very powerfeul.This is a very deep and ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Angst
I really love this poem. I can relate to it. I like the flow of the poem and I thought your words were very powerfeul.This is a very deep and ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Life -- The Meaning
I love this poem. It was unique and deep. I often wonder what's the meaning of life and why we are all here. What's the purpose of life? I have ...
Apr 26, 2011
