alwaysawriter

Hi Bella. Welcome to YWS. Please do two reviews to make up for this; the 2:1 says that you should review two other works before you submit one of your ...

Girl: How could you do this to me...[s].........[/s]I thought you two loved me? An elipse is only three dots. Dad: [s]I do[/s],--we do-- its just not working out between us. ...

You love[s]r[/s] her and can't [ won't because can't implies that it's impossible but it's his choice so it should be won't] ever leave her Why can't you see you're ...

Hi Rayne. Sorry it took so long; as I said before, I completly forgot about the contest. I'm ahead on my NaNo--at least for today--so I figured I'd go ahead ...

Hi dragonrage58. Welcome to YWS and all that other stuff. Your frightened by them If you were crazy, something would be there, but your not. your supposed to be sleeping.” ...

I just read over one of your stories (A Gentle Breeze) to get an understanding about what you were talking about and I can answer your questions: I will never ...

Hi Muse. Sorry it's been over a month; I haven't been able to be on much. The review is just somewhat of an overall one. She collapsed onto the ground, ...

Hi Sunlight. It's been over a month, due to being grounded; sorry. Reviews on poems are not my strong point so this is my best shot. :) In the new ...

Hi Heather. Here to review, since I know it's due tomorrow. I understand what everyone said about there not being much emotion. You kind of state them directly, like "I'm ...

Hi Jasmine. It's been three weeks or so since you requested I review your chapters. Sorry if I'm harsh. “even more so, now that I’m living there.” "Even more so, ...

Hi OE. I guess I figured I'd go from the bottem of my list on up so here I go. He sense that she was uncomfortable, and a toothy grin ...

Hi Jon. Sorry it took me so long--I was banished off the computer. A necklace is all that I can remember……… An ellipse is only three dots. “Hurry junanzo, we ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. As per the rule here, please post two reviews because you posted one of your own works. Wow. I was pretty impressed by reading this. You ...

Hi Thewriter08. Welcome to YWS. Before I review this, I just want to point out the 2:1 rule: you need to post two reviews before you post one of your ...

Hi. Thanks for the friend request. :) I'm going to review the first things I notice about each chapter of the chapter then critique it in whole. First part The ...